高考英语【书面写作模块】增强书面表达效果的技巧

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增强书面表达效果的技巧全国高考书面表达的评分标准：--覆盖所有主要内容；

--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；

--语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

--有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文 结构紧凑；

完全达到了预期的写作目的。第五档（很好）（21－25分）上海高考 写作评分标准：1、本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言

10分，组织结构5分。

2、评分时应注意内容要点、应用词汇和语法

结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。

3、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确

定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档

次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相

加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加 4 - 5分，

15分以下者只能考虑加 0- 3分。

4、词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧一、使用较高级的词汇1、这件工作挺难的。

2、最后他了解到了所有的事情。

3、感谢你不辞辛苦地帮助我。That is a difficult job.challenging/ demandingHe learned about everything at last.eventuallyI should thank you for taking so much

trouble to help me.I am awfully grateful to you for…4. 几天前，我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。

5. 努力使我们的生活变得更好。We try our best to make our life better.　　Several days ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine.A couple of days ago, I came across/ bumped into an old friend of mine.

// (…, it so happened that I ran into … )make every effort to …

spare no effort to better our life… 像access, available, annoyed, appealing, charming, cute, confused, contact, challenging, considerably, consequently, demanding, essential, fascinated, locate, participate, significant, schedule, terrific, 等单词，均可视作高级词汇。1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.

2. We all think he is a great man.

3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.

Thanks to/ Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.Or: A good idea suddenly struck me.PracticeOr: I hit on/ upon a good idea.4. Shanghai lies in the east of China.

5. As a result, the plan was a failure.

6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.

7. A new railway is being built in my hometown.The plan turned out to be a failure.Shanghai is situated/ located in the east of China.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 8. She went to Austria in order to study music.

9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.

10. In our school, there are two tennis courts.

11. You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.We have two tennis courts available in our school.You’ll have no trouble (in) finding my house. 二、使用较丰富的句式1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. (使用V-ing形式)

2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句)

3. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (用过去分词) On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Once seen, it can never be forgotten.4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)

5. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）

It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)

7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (使用V-ing形式)

Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.8. I won’t believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)

9. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句)

10. It is great fun to climb the hill. (用感叹句)No matter what he says, I won’t believe. The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. What great fun it is to climb the hill!11. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）

12. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)

13. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)

No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Study hard, and you’ll make rapid progress.It is suggested that the conference be put off.Supplementary: 精选句型1. 不用说/ 不言而喻，…It goes without saying that …= (It is) needless to say (that)…= It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, …It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.I.用于文章主题句不用说早睡早起是值得的。2. 俗语说得好：…。Well goes an old saying, …= As an old saying goes (runs, says),…= An old saying goes like this, …俗话说得好: 诚实为上策。As an old saying goes, Honesty is the best policy.3. 我深信…I am greatly convinced (that)…= I am greatly assured (that)…

= I strongly believe that…I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.我深信预防胜于治疗。4. …是很容易证明的。It can be easily proved that …It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than/ is so precious as time.时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。II. 用于文章承转句 1. 我们有理由相信…We have reasons to believe (that)…We have every reason to believe that…We have reasons to believe that physical punishment should be strictly prohibited. 我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。2. 此外，我们不应忽视…Besides (In addition), we should not neglect that …In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。3. 事实上，…As a matter of fact, …= In fact, …As a matter of fact, it is health that counts/ … what really counts is health.事实上, 健康才是最重要。4. 相反地;…On the contrary, …= By contrast, …

= Contrast to…, …On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.相反地, 少数学生似乎还在鬼混。III. 用于文章结论句1. 最后，但并非最不重要，…。Last but not least, ….(该句型用于罗列最后一个观点。)Last but not least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。2. 因此, 我们能下个结论, 那就是…。We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)…We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world. 因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。3. 这证据显示～的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。This evidence shows that the importance of ～ cannot be overemphasized.This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.这证据显示交通安全的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。4. 总而言之，…。In conclusion, … = To sum up, …In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by/ observe/ obey traffic regulations.总而言之，好国民应该遵守交通规则。三、使用恰当的连接词XXXXX在议论文中，为了使结构清楚，要点 明了，可以使用如下几组词汇：1）first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), last/ finally

2）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally3）to start with, next, in addition, finally

4）first and foremost, besides, last but not least5）on the one hand, on the other hand6）for one thing, for another thing（适用于

两点的情况） It’s most desirable that you should use No. 2) & 3) & 4).1. We have many things to do. We believe we can finish before the day is over.

We have quite a lot to do. Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over.Please compare the following sentences:2. He is running his research company and he has another job at the university.

? He is running his research company in addition to his job at the university.3. Most students think that it is necessary to learn English. Some others think that it is not necessary to learn English.

Most/ A majority of students hold (the idea) that it is necessary to learn English while some (students) argue that there is no need to learn English.

(1999 Shanghai)Study the following paragraphs:1. On one hand, cars make people's life more convenient. T 内容过长，仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览，全文请查看图片预览。 he children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should lay/ place/ put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as I’m concernedBesideshoweverThereforeLast but not leastbecauseTips on Writing BetterUtilize some high-grade words;

Adopt a variety of sentence patterns;

Employ some proper transitional or cohesive words.Summary[文章尾部最后500字内容到此结束,中间部分内容请查看底下的图片预览]

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