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Beautify the writing

“Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an ______man.”

--Francis Bacon

exact

阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。

--培根

Welcome to our class

如何让你作文瞬间变得“高某某”?

How to polish our sentences?

Teaching goals:

1. Master how to make sentences better.

2. Learn how to polish compositions

Task 1, How to make the sentences better

1.要点可适当整合，用一个句子表达。

1)姓名：钱学森 出生年月：1911年

出生地：上海 被誉为“中国航天之父”

2)纽约中央公园位于曼哈顿的中央。面积为340万平方米。

QianXuesen,____________ “father of China’s space program”, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.

Central park, ________ the centre of Manhattan,

covers an area of 3.4 million square metres.

regarded as

located in

3) Many students spend a lot of time

playing computer games.

It’s a waste of time and energy.

Many students spend a lot of time playing

computer games ,_________________________

________________________.

which is a waste of time and energy

_____________, they participate in programs that help society.

setting out to Yunnan

To stand out

2)They want to stand out ,so they participate in programs that help society.

Before ___________________, we were very excited .

2.运用非谓语动词，使句子更简洁，更有文采。

1）Before we set out to Yunnan, we were very excited.

3) The film is set in the ancient China. It is worth seeing.4) When you face difficulty , you should never give up.

The film ____________________ is

worth seeing.

set in the ancient China

When facing difficulty

__________________ , you should never give up.

5) It is high time we took part in some activities.

We want to make ourselves more healthy.

It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.

3. 运用with结构，使句子更加简洁生动。

1)Since elva’s photo album is coming out this month, teens talked with her about her career and life.

2) Our society is developing.Different modern news media have come into being.

With______________________________________,

teens talked with her about her career and life.

With____________________________, different

modern news media have come into being.

Elva’s photo album coming out this month

the development of our society

3)As the science and technology develops, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life.

_______________________, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life.

With the science and technology developing

4.借助介词或介词短语巧妙衔接句子

1)Because the Internet is developing quickly, I can talk to my friends far away.

2)You’d better take your own cups and chopsticks. You mustn’t use paper cups.

___________________, I can talk to my friends far away.

You’d better take your own cups and

chopsticks _________________________.

Thanks to the internet

instead of using paper cups

5.运用恰当的连接词（并列连词、从属连词、和连接副词），增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。

1)NewYork city is a fantasy world . You can do almost anything there.

2)Paul’s nickname is cp3. He established the cp3 foundation in 2005.

NewYork city is a fantasy world______you

can do almost anything

Paul______ nickname is cp3 established the cp3 foundation in 2005.

whose

where

3)The journey is tough , but I will never give up.

apart from/ besides/ as well as/although/ even though/even if /meanwhile/so/however/also

______________________, I will never give up.

No matter how tough it is

6.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句等，增强语意。

1)He knew little that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhod hero.

2)People will begin to understand something about copyright protection only when people have to pay.

Little____________ that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhod hero.

Only when people have to pay_______________to

understand something about copyright protection

will people begin

did he know

3)The way they play together makes Manchester United popular.(强调主语)

4)On May 12, 2008 a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.（强调时间）

It is __________________a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.

5)This creature taught me a beautiful lesson.(感叹句型)

It is____________________________ makes Manchester United popular.

the way they play together that

on May 12, 2008 that

____________________this creature taught me !

What a beautiful lesson

Task2用所学方法翻译句子

1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。

用连词because

Because she has no friend in the country,

she found it impossible to find a job.

用非谓语结构

Having no friend in the country,

she found it impossible to find a job.

2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂

用定语从句

The book, is easy to understand.

用非谓语结构

The book , is easy to understand

which was written in simple English,

written in simple English,

3. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。

用定语从句

They are visitors who come from several

countries.

用非谓语结构

They are visitors coming from several

countries.

4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。

用并列句

He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.

用非谓语结构

Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.

二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档

三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力

四. 尝试多 样化表达方式

一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力

①强调句

②With短语复合结构

③定语从句

④名词性从句(主宾表同从句)

⑤各种状语从句

⑥被动语态

Task 3 Promote

Beautify the writing

Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.

Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.

They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.

Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.

Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.

Task4 Exchange and discuss your partner’s composition, following the criteria.

1. Go over what we have just learned.

2. Write an article and use non-finite verbs in it.

Homework

高考链接

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

写作要点:

1.做家务的理由; 2.做家务的过程 3.你的感受。

注意:

1.短文词数不少于100;

2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

我会审题

我会联想

1.词汇铺路

(1)家务事housework

(2)忙于做某事be busy/occupied with sth.

(3)大扫除a spring clean

(4)拖地mop the floor

(5)把XXXXXXXXXX放入垃圾箱put...into a dustbin

(6)对XXXXXXXXXX满意be satisfied with

2.句型搭桥

Firstly... Then... After that...

我会表达

I am an 18-year-old middle school student.????

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